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My brother said my best story idea sounded like a 'concrete pour schedule' and now I can't unsee it.

He was looking at my prompt about a character whose rigid daily routine is disrupted, and he just shrugged and said, 'It's got the same dramatic tension as watching my crew wait for a cement truck that's stuck in traffic.'
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the_harper
the_harper1mo ago
My friend Mila's right, but try adding a weird detail like a neighbor's parrot.
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mila_jones39
That's a hilarious way to kill an idea.
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